Lady Sydney

Thanks everyone. Your crits were very helpful; be looking out for the next chapter. I'll probably just PM you when it's up though.... Thanks again. Bye! -Syd

Haha! I read this the first time you showed me, but never got around to critting it. I knew I was forgetting something... Anyway. I echo. Gabrielle and Rieda have ...

Wow. That scene. E & T. Just....whew. :shock: Full on and in detail, yeah? :shock: Ahem. *scoots away to the next section* Oh btw. I forgot where I found this ...

Well, what more can I say? Adam and Nutty have pretty much pointed out all the points you need to work on. Your description is very well, polished even, but ...

Thanks, biancarayne!! I'll take that into consideration. *jots it down* :D

The other story I wrote, When All Else Fails, Love Prevails , wasn't going too well. The idea just sorta died on me, and I can't seem to revive it. ...

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Vern! Seriously, what is up with your characters?!?! Twisted much! lol But I guess that's what kinda makes the story. :wink: And, finally, Tea knows the truth about her brother. ...

OMG! You're from I T A L Y !!!!!!!!!!!!! That's so cool. Hehe Welcome to YWS, Felicity!!! ~*Sydney~*

I agree with Jenna about the grammar and such. Watch out for those!! Other than that, I enjoyed it. I look forward to more!! ~Sydney

LOL. G-wizz. That was great and very....*cough*...steamy. *watches her computer monitor melt* ...steamy indeed. The beginning was very nice as well. And I think that Samantha needs to get some ...

Oooooo, this is good. :D I like Jared, and I don't like him. He's evil, but he's tough. You know? Ah well. He's great! Raed is annoying though. lol But ...

Perfectionists

Eradicate Elves Ruin All Disco Island Caves After They Eat Arrogant

Chewing Hot Olives Can Only Leave A Terrible Ewwwwwww! (lol) Angel